And well, this isn't a finished piece. Like I said in my description, I was planning on inking this, this is just the original sketch. but thanks for the feedback!
Last edited by KaidaFaye at 5:33:29 PM EDT on May 8, 2012.
I love how she's holding the guy and her expression! That's probably my favorite part of this piece. It just feels really dynamic to me. His face too...just wow. The background is also very well done, especially the car! I could never dream of doing that.
The grass could probably be a little more 'loose' with fast strokes instead of stiff strands but that's just a minor thing. Also, I notice the sketch book edges were left in. You could probably crop them out without losing anything important if you wanted : >
KaidaFaye
Manga-ka (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/12 | Reply
@Sage of Magic:
That car was such a pain...
And well, this isn't a finished piece. Like I said in my description, I was planning on inking this, this is just the original sketch. but thanks for the feedback!
Last edited by KaidaFaye at 5:33:29 PM EDT on May 8, 2012.
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/08/12 | Reply
I love how she's holding the guy and her expression! That's probably my favorite part of this piece. It just feels really dynamic to me. His face too...just wow. The background is also very well done, especially the car! I could never dream of doing that.
The grass could probably be a little more 'loose' with fast strokes instead of stiff strands but that's just a minor thing. Also, I notice the sketch book edges were left in. You could probably crop them out without losing anything important if you wanted : >